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Snippets: March 31, 2009

Filed under: SLA Industries — Whyte @ 10:14 am

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Added: March 22, 2009

Filed under: SLA Industries — Whyte @ 9:06 am

Chapter 15 (AND 16!) for Quid Pro Quo….ah, it’s coming back, what I wanted to do…

P.S. Oh, and never mind the dates on these things…WordPress is screwing them up and I have no idea how to fix them…

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Trying again…

Filed under: Updates — Whyte @ 9:14 pm

Having problems with the ol’ blog, obviously. Stories can still be accessed off the main page; just click on one of the “comments” links.

There are some new updates: Deliria’s been completed (10 chapters), another chapter to Quid Pro Quo (20), and a brand-new Cerise story, “Pigman’s Playground” (with appreciated feedback and co-effort with my GM, Rob).

Let’s give this a shot…

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Deliria continued: April 20, 2009

Filed under: SLA Industries — Whyte @ 8:54 am

To my surprise, her story continues. Erquin, the player of Agony the Brain Waster, decided to ask the NPC some questions, much to my delight. Parts 6-9 have dialogue (internal and external) that belong to Erquin; except for a few spelling corrections, I left his text as written (and denoted in bold, since I see Agony having the stronger voice; somehow, he is ‘louder’ in Deliria’s view). Unlike the first 5 parts, there is no time spacing out the scenes; 6-9 is a continuous interaction. Very exciting, at least, since Agony continues to “get close” to entering the White.

Forgive it ending on a cliffhanger at the moment, I’m hoping Erquin wants to see what happens next (in what will be part 10).

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Quid Pro Quo: March 16, 2009

Filed under: SLA Industries — Whyte @ 5:56 am

I actually added two or three chapters to my work-in-progress SLA novella since my previous blog, one very recently, so decided to post what I’ve got so far. I plan to add to it as I finish chapters.

Think I look forward to writing a bit of James McManus as a teen. I’m almost there.

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